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Through her eyes
         she sees
               him crying
         over a girl
              he cared about
                      did he love her?
               she doesn't know.
                    but she'll never know that answer now.
         
Through her eyes
          she sees
               her father crying
                      over daddy's little girl
                  the two most important people in his life
                          his wife
                                   his daughter
                             gone forever
                     
Through her eyes
           she sees
               a girl crying
                     over the best friend she's had forever
                two little girls playing with little dolls
                          seems too long ago
                               it doesn't seem real
                          to two sixteen year old girls
                                just trying to get by

Through her eyes
           she sees
               another girl crying
           over a best friend that meant the world to her
                  a girl that's gone away
                         that girl was
                             her strength through everything
                                         her light in the darkness

Through her eyes
                 she sees
           strangers
               lifting her body off the ground
            closing a dark bag over her bloody wrists
                 she's lifted out of that bag a few days later
                          only to be put forever
                              into a cold house of wood
                                  six feet underground

Through her eyes
                 she sees
                        friends weep
                                  a family mourn another death
               she doesn't say a word
           autumn turns to winter
                      and winter turns spring
           the seasons change
                   but the fact still remains
       Through her eyes she knows
                     she'll never
                               take another breath
                     she'll never
                               slash her skin again
                     she'll never
                               cry another tear

Through her eyes
                 she knows
                              She'll
                                    never
                                           be
                                              in

                                                pain
                                                   again
....interesting poem from the point of view of someone looking back on life
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lordbeazy Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2006
Interesting, thoughtful, observant and written with style. :rose:
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silentangeldying Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
thanks alot...:):D*blushes*
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lordbeazy Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2006
Welcome. :rose:
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silentangeldying Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
here's info for everyone..
...would-be autobiographical
haha
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Puckerz Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2006   Writer
VERY nice.. it kind of took the two poems you did beforehand and throws them together in a story-like setting. Very well done... I wouldn't change a thing. *shoves that one in her favorites too =)*
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silentangeldying Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
awww thanks *blushes* this poem is kinda well....based on a daydream i had...recently..
thanks for all your comments and fav adds =D
you rock
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Puckerz Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2006   Writer
Aww thank you =)

No problem.
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Abatrasau Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2006
oo really nice...i like the way its wrote. very nice perspective....awesome
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